Correção do texto "My friend, I have some..."
- cafranco
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My friend,
I have some news to tell. I, Mark and the boys were on the boat, when my brother saw a pretty girl and fell in love
for her. But, you know, Mark is very shy and I thought: I should do something about this, to help my brother, and so I did.
At night, when I went to the dance-floor and dance with the girl, who has fallen in love.
When Mark saw me dancing with Donna ( the girl), he went out quickly. But, after that, on the next day, Mark lost the shyness and called her to dance.
I have some news to tell. I, Mark and the boys were on the boat, when my brother saw a pretty girl and fell in love
for her. But, you know, Mark is very shy and I thought: I should do something about this, to help my brother, and so I did.
At night, when I went to the dance-floor and dance with the girl, who has fallen in love.
When Mark saw me dancing with Donna ( the girl), he went out quickly. But, after that, on the next day, Mark lost the shyness and called her to dance.
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- Donay Mendonça
- Professor de inglês com 20 anos de experiência.
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Cafranco,
Sugestões de melhoria para seu texto:
I have some news to tell you. I, Mark and the boys were on the boat when my brother saw a pretty girl and fell in love
with her. But, as you know, Mark is very shy and I thought : I should do something about that, I should help my brother, and I did so.
At night, I went to the dance-floor to dance with the girl he had fallen in love with. When Mark saw me dancing with Donna ( the girl), he left quickly. But, after that, on the next day, Mark got over his shyness and asked her to dance.
Boa sorte!
Sugestões de melhoria para seu texto:
I have some news to tell you. I, Mark and the boys were on the boat when my brother saw a pretty girl and fell in love
with her. But, as you know, Mark is very shy and I thought : I should do something about that, I should help my brother, and I did so.
At night, I went to the dance-floor to dance with the girl he had fallen in love with. When Mark saw me dancing with Donna ( the girl), he left quickly. But, after that, on the next day, Mark got over his shyness and asked her to dance.
Boa sorte!
- Flavia.lm
- Localização: São Paulo - SP
- Membro desde: 05 Jul 2009, 16:34
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Sobre o trecho "I, Mark and the boys were on the boat..."
Em inglês normalmente o "I" vem por último. Questão de respeito pelo(s) outro(s), I think.
Mark, the others and I ...
The others, Mark and I ...
Em inglês normalmente o "I" vem por último. Questão de respeito pelo(s) outro(s), I think.
Mark, the others and I ...
The others, Mark and I ...
