Gostaria q vcs pudessem corrigir meu texto q eu fiz pra escola
My next vacation
I still don't have a plan for my next vaction, but on the last vacation I stayed for 10 days in Santos at my uncles' house and I enjoyed myself, because there are many places to visit and things to do, for example, go to the beach, visit a museum, go to the shopping center etc.
Probably, i will go there again in the middle of this year. My parents are thinking about travelling by ship on a cruise in the end of this year and i think that it will be cool, because it will be my first trip on a ship.
Acho q o texto está um pouco repetitivo, tem algumas palavras q eu não tenho certeza se está certo. Gostaria da ajuda de vcs.