Correção do texto "the influence of the media"

I will talk how we are influenced by media.
In nowadays, the media are very important in our society. They are expressed by internet, radio, television, magazines, newspapers and cinema.
The media use beyond the gift of words, the manipulation with images and slogans to show us a reality completely distorted, for which the consumer join thinking on the effectiveness of the product
For example, when we see a magazine, a movie, or even a television advert, we look for those men and women who seem to be perfect, without imperfections and all that we want is be like them, the typical ideal image of a man and woman, with everything in place and the right measures. Without problems!
However, we neither realize that it is all an illusion! They are all full of make-up and often and forced to make rigid diets to get a body “better”. Even in magazines and newspapers their images are altered before publication. For that reason we must never try to be as one actor, single or model because they also have his faults, although not show in the press.
There are many other cases in which we are influenced by the media, for example, in the majority of products this advertising only speaks in as these are good, doesn’t have defects and solve all our problems.
For this reason, we should be very careful, because in one way or other, the media are always present in our lives, we must be careful and not believe in everything that we see and hear. We must be careful when shopping, because we are often taken by advertising and we finally did superfluous shopping, only because that product seemed be very good.
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Nowadays, the media are very important in our society. They are expressed by internet, radio, television, magazines, newspapers and cinema.
The media use beyond the gift of words, the manipulation with images and slogans to show us a reality completely distorted, for which the consumer join thinking on the effectiveness of the product.
For example, when we see a magazine, a movie, or even a television advert, we look for those men and women who seem to be perfect, without imperfections and all that we want is be like them, the typical ideal image of a man and woman, with everything in place and the right measures. Without problems!
However, we neither realize that it is all an illusion! They are all full of make-up and often and forced to go on rigid diets to get a body “better”. Even in magazines and newspapers their images are altered before publication. For that reason we must never try to be like an actor, single or model because they also have their faults, although they do not show in the press.
There are many other cases in which we are influenced by the media, for example, in the majority of products this advertising only speaks in as these are good, doesn’t have defects and solve all our problems.
For this reason, we should be very careful, because in one way or other, the media are always present in our lives, we must be careful and not believe in everything that we see and hear. We must be careful when shopping, because we are often taken by advertising and we finally did superfluous shopping, only because that product seemed be very good.



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