Correção: Feeling ashamed of your looks

We all care about our appearance, who doesn't ? Some more than others. But some people have some features which cause them discomfort and shame. It makes you to feel small, it makes you to hide, to cover yourself. Telling people to just focus on what's inside does not help so much because who we are is more than inside. We are physical beings too. Many people have their own story of suffering and pain because of the judgemental community. Feeling unattactive because of being fat, toothless, dubled chin, or by any other physical "imperfection" might bring many people to severe depresion. But you know what ? We are who we are, we all have something that others don't. Some people are terminally ill and all they want is to release their pain for a minute. At least we have health and a big heart, and you can be sure about one single thing, you will never be alone because the beauty comes from within.

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No trecho : have their pain released

Eu escreveria: have their pain relieved.

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Olá Roger Lourenço,

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We all care about our appearance, who doesn't? Some more than others. But some people have some features which cause them discomfort and shame. It makes you feel small, it makes you hide, cover yourself. Telling people to just focus on what's inside does not help so much because who we are is more than inside. We are physical beings too. Many people have their own story of suffering and pain because of the judgmental community. Feeling unattractive because of being fat, toothless, double-chinned, or by any other physical "imperfection" might bring many people to severe depression. But you know what? We are who we are, we all have something that others don't. Some people are terminally ill and all they want is to release their pain for a minute. At least we have health and a big heart, and you can be sure about one single thing, you will never be alone because the beauty comes from within.


HTH!
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We all care about our appearance, who doesn't ? Some more than others. But some people have some features which cause them discomfort and shame. It makes you to feel small, it makes you to hide, to cover yourself. Telling people to just focus on what's inside does not help so much because who we are is more than inside. We are physical beings too. Many people have their own story of suffering and pain because of the judgemental community. Feeling unattactive because of being fat, toothless, dubled chin, or by any other physical "imperfection" might bring many people to severe depresion. But you know what ? We are who we are, we all have something that others don't. Some people are terminally ill and all they want is to release their pain for a minute. At least we have health and a big heart, and you can be sure about one single thing, you will never be alone because the beauty comes from within.

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We all care about our appearance, who doesn’t? Some more than others. But some people have some features which cause them discomfort and shame. It makes you feel small, it makes you hide, cover yourself. Telling people to just focus on what's inside does not help so much because who we are is more than what we are inside. We are physical beings too. Many people have their own story of suffering and pain because of the judgemental community. Feeling unattractive because of being fat, toothless, doubled chin or for any other physical "imperfection" may lead many people to severe depression. But you know what ? We are who we are, we all have something that others don't. Some people are terminally ill and all they want is to have their pain released (OU eased) for a minute. At least we have health and a big heart, and you can be sure about one single thing, you will never be alone because the beauty comes from within.
Carls escreveu:... Toothless, doubled chin or for any other physical "imperfection" ...


Olá Carls,

Não estou conseguindo encontrar nenhuma referência com doubled chin, você tem alguma? As variações que conheço são double chin ou double-chinned, mas talvez essa seja menos comum.

Obrigado!
Avatar do usuário Carls 3140 2 74
Olá ArturCarvalho,

Obrigado pela observação, na verdade queria sugerir double chin. São os riscos de copiar/colar...
Carls escreveu:Olá ArturCarvalho,

Obrigado pela observação, na verdade queria sugerir double chin. São os riscos de copiar/colar...


Faz parte. Você marca as alterações no texto original e depois escreve o texto com as sugestões e também as marca. Tudo isso dá muito trabalho e gera muito texto. Mas o resultado final é melhor.
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One way to spot some words with a different spelling would be using a text processor in English (WPS, or Writer - the LibreOffice processor, for example) and copying-pasting the text there.
By hitting Tools-Spelling it certainly will grab the wrong words and make suggestions of changes to them.