Correção para Arsênio Santos: Professional presentation

Texto original:
Hello,
I am Arsênio Santos and I've been working for GW as a Senior Analyst for 3 years. We are based in São Paulo and the staff works at our headquarter, on sites (clients) in Brazil and abroad.
I work in support assisting in the corrections and development of systems for the client ABC of the company GW.
Once I started working there, there was an improvement in customer service and systems. Thus, we have achieved a better result in the company's SLA indicators.
Previously, I've worked as a Senior Analyst at ACC BRAZIL, where I had an amazing feedback from the leaders and staff. I believe that dealing with new experiences and challenges has brought more results to my professional career.

Tradução:
Olá,
Sou Arsênio Santos e venho trabalhando para GW como Analista Sênior a 3 anos. Nossa base é em São Paulo e a os funcionários trabalham na matriz, nos clientes do Brasil e no exterior.
Atuo no suporte auxiliando nas correções e desenvolvimento de sistemas ao cliente ABC da empresa GW.
Uma vez que comecei a trabalhar lá, houve melhora no atendimento ao cliente e nos sistemas. Assim, nós alcançamos um melhor resultado nos indicadores SLA da empresa.
Anteriormente, eu trabalhei como Analista Sênior na ACC BRAZIL, onde tive um impressionante feedback dos líderes e da equipe. Eu acredito que lidando com novas experiências e desafios trouxe mais resultado para minha carreira profissional.
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Sugestões de correção:

I am Arsênio Santos and I've been working for GW as a Senior Analyst for 3 years. We are based in São Paulo and the staff works at our headquarters, on sites (clients) in Brazil and abroad.
I work in support assistance in the corrections and development of systems for the client ABC of the company GW.
After I started working there, there was an improvement in customer service and systems. Thus, we have achieved a better result in the company's SLA indicators.
Previously, I worked as a Senior Analyst at ACC BRAZIL, where I had an amazing feedback from the leaders and staff. I believe that dealing with new experiences and challenges has brought better results to my professional career.


Bons estudos.