Correção para FABIANO ALVES FERRE: AND YEAR

End year.

Hi
To travel in year end is need very atenction. So have been lot of accidents which do provocations of injuries e deaths at the people. Actually the proprietors of cars do don't verifications and actualization in security equipments in your vehicles, how weells, oil control, mottors,breaks and seat belt . I want speak a simple thing of more importantly, do revisions all the best,in the end, you go win and not lose.
Thank
FABIANO ALVES FERREIRA.
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Em vez de corrigir o texto, sugiro um texto alternativo. O texto original possui traduções literais que inviabilizam uma correção simples.
Traveling at the end of the year requires a lot of attention. Besides, there have been many accidents which have caused injuries and deaths. And it often happens because drivers don't bother to take their cars for a checkup.

In other words, it really pays to make sure your car is working fine before a trip. That could avoid more serious problems.
Bons estudos.