Correção de texto: AND YEAR [2787]
- FABIANO ALVES FERRE
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End year.
Hi
To travel in year end is need very atenction. So have been lot of accidents which do provocations of injuries e deaths at the people. Actually the proprietors of cars do don't verifications and actualization in security equipments in your vehicles, how weells, oil control, mottors, breaks and seat belt . I want speak a simple thing of more importantly, do revisions all the best, in the end, you go win and not lose.
Thank
FABIANO ALVES FERREIRA.
Hi
To travel in year end is need very atenction. So have been lot of accidents which do provocations of injuries e deaths at the people. Actually the proprietors of cars do don't verifications and actualization in security equipments in your vehicles, how weells, oil control, mottors, breaks and seat belt . I want speak a simple thing of more importantly, do revisions all the best, in the end, you go win and not lose.
Thank
FABIANO ALVES FERREIRA.
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- Donay Mendonça
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Em vez de corrigir o texto, sugiro um texto alternativo. O texto original possui traduções literais que inviabilizam uma correção simples.
Bons estudos.Traveling at the end of the year requires a lot of attention. Besides, there have been many accidents which have caused injuries and deaths. And it often happens because drivers don't bother to take their cars for a checkup.
In other words, it really pays to make sure your car is working fine before a trip. That could avoid more serious problems.
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