Correção para Isamélia Soares: The power of music

Music awakens in us a varied range of emocions. Some musics make us cry, shiver, while others make us want to dance.
Much more than a simple fun, music goes beyond its recreational role because it stimulates different areas of our brain and has the power of healing.
Recently I started to use music as a therapy, when I find out a specific type of music: the beneural beats like delta waves and others. It helps sleep better, brings peace of mind and has the same effects as the meditation.

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Music awakens in us a varied range of emotions. Some songs make us cry, shiver, while others make us want to dance.
Much more than simple entertainment, music goes beyond its recreational role because it stimulates different areas of our brain and has the power of healing.
Recently I started to use music as a therapy, when I found a specific type of music: the beneural beats like delta waves and others. It helps sleep better, brings peace of mind and has the same effects as meditation.
Bons estudos.