Correção texto em inglês: Pros and cons - family abroad

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Pros and cons of bringing up a family in another country

There are many chalenges we face when we decide to live in another country, especially when we go with the whole family. However many values and strengths are aggregated in all areas of live: more Knowledge, new friends, new contacts, new career opportunities, and many other points.
First, adaptation is an important factor. Does this factor shold be considered a cons? Perhaps, but that generates an immense Knowledge in the person; the horizons and boundaries are enlarged and that is a big pro.You must be aware that: the culture, the climate, the food, the time, the routine, the clothes, the language, the lifestyle, will change, but you must be open to these changes positively.
There are family values that help the individual to respond better to the chalenges and cons."Two are better than one".Ecclesiastes 4. A united family that are friends of each other, and that when one is weak, the other is willing to help lift, is an essencial right to live anywhere but especially in this situation of living outside their place of origin.
Miss the homeland may evenhurt, but I think there are more pros than cons because cons are just challenges to be overcome because: with effort, determination, will to win,suceed, grow, learn; with love putting into pratice the values and principles of charater to live well with the family and the society - what God teaches us with your love - we can live well anywhere.
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A propósito, escreve-se "challenge" com dois l's.
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Pros and cons of bringing a family in another country

There are many challenges we face when we decide to live in another country, especially when we go with the whole family. However many values and strengths are aggregated in all areas of live: more Knowledge, new friends, new contacts, new career opportunities, and many other points.
" in all areas of LIVING" after a preposition you must use the verb + ing
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Envio agora o 2º parágrafo da redação "Family abroad".Escrevi certo esse segundo trecho? Obrigada!

Pros and cons of bringing up a family in another country

First, adaptation is an important factor. Does this factor shold be considered a cons? Perhaps, but that generates an immense Knowledge in the person; the horizons and boundaries are enlarged and that is a big pro.You must be aware that: the culture, the climate, the food, the time, the routine, the clothes, the language, the lifestyle, will change, but you must be open to these changes positively.
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First, adaptation is an important factor. Should this factor be considered an obstacle? Perhaps, but that gives people an immense knowledge ; the horizons and boundaries are broadened and that is a great advantage.You must be aware that the culture, the climate, the food, the time, the routine, the clothes, the language, the lifestyle, etc will change, but you must be open to these changes positively.