Correções de Textos: The last day of vacation (Reported speech)

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Fabi sent Sandy a note on her last vacation day. She said that it had been very fun there, but it was time to go back home. According to her, she would get on the bus at 2 pm two days after. She should get home at about 6 pm, so he asked Sandy to leave everything organized. She added that when she got home, she would definitely want to drink a cup of coffee, and then asked Sandy to make some coffee before 6 pm.

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Fabi sent Sandy a note on her last vacation day. She said that it had been very fun there, but it was time to go back home. According to her, she would get on the bus at 2 p.m. Two days later. Furthermore, she said (that) she should get home around 6 p.m. Therefore, she had asked Sandy to leave everything organized. In addition to that, she had added that when she got home, she would definitely want to have some (= drink a cup of) coffee, and then she had asked Sandy to make some coffee before 6 p.m. Não sei se era isso, fiz algumas substituições, caso tenha respondido errado, pode falar, é meu primeiro post aqui :P (pegue leve!). Adicionei outras coisas - como algumas conjunções e mudei o 'after' para 'later' - para mudar um pouco mais o texto. Fontes que usei: learnenglish.britishcouncil