Describe the best thing you've done for someone in your life
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Hello guys!! If someone could look at my text and tell me mistakes that I let pass, I would appreciate it very much.
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In my senior year at school, I had a very close friend, we studied together for a long time. Nevertheless, she had to stop her studies, then I decided to help her not to drop her studies. At that time, it was not too much for me, but she tells me that I helped her a lot. Maybe is not the best thing I've done for someone , but at least It was a good thing and something that I did without realizing.
Thanks for the help <3
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In my senior year at school, I had a very close friend, we studied together for a long time. Nevertheless, she had to stop her studies, then I decided to help her not to drop her studies. At that time, it was not too much for me, but she tells me that I helped her a lot. Maybe is not the best thing I've done for someone , but at least It was a good thing and something that I did without realizing.
Thanks for the help <3
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In my senior year at school, I had a very close friend. We had been studying together for a long time. Nevertheless, she had to stop her studies, then I decided to help her continue. At the time, it was not too much for me, but she tells me now that I helped her a lot. Maybe it was not the best thing I've done for someone, but at least it was a good thing and something that I did without realizing the extent.
In my senior year at school, I had a very close friend. We had been studying together for a long time. Nevertheless, she had to stop her studies, then I decided to help her continue. At the time, it was not too much for me, but she tells me now that I helped her a lot. Maybe it was not the best thing I've done for someone, but at least it was a good thing and something that I did without realizing the extent.
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