Um guia para quem estuda Inglês Online
Despite an increase in ["despite" exige um substantivo ou gerúndio] the quality of the Brazil's education is growing up in recent years [usamos "grow up" para seres humanos - em outros contextos, "grow" é um verbo auto-suficiente], improvements can still be made in this country, which, like the others, has its education(al) issues. International partnerships are essential in allowing [concisão] Brazil to reach a better position in scientific fields. It is known that The United States make great investments in scientific research ["research" é incontável] and, because of this, I believe that studying there through the Science Without Borders Program can be a great opportunity to bring new knowledge to my country and contribute to its development.
Studying abroad can provide students with an incredible opportunity for growth in many aspects, and this can change students’ lives. It should make me better prepared for the labor market and will help me in my academic career. Furthermore, since I am currently involved in a research project focused on the application of text mining to the identification of social presence, bringing in new techniques and scientific knowledge should be amazing and can [desnecessário, por estar implícito] provide new perspectives and approaches capable of enriching our research environment.
Moreover, this experience will certainly improve my skills as an English speaker. Although I am fluent in English, I am sure that being immersed in an English-speaking environment will further enhance my academic and everyday language skills [concisão e estilo]. Besides, some of the main journals, articles and scientific publications are written in this language, chiefly [evitar repetição de "mainly"] in the fields of Information Systems, which are my area of study. For these reasons [estilo e fluxo], I firmly believe that learning more about the language will facilitate my access into [semântica] the scientific community and, consequently, contribute to a brilliant and productive career.
As I said, I am currently engaged in a research project at my university in which I study the area of text-mining and its application to the identification of students' social presence in educational forums and chats on the Moodle Platform. Therefore, it is a field that interests me greatly [estilo]. Unfortunately, in Brazil, attending classes that approach this field is very difficult. Having specialized professors teaching subjects that involve this field in undergraduate programs is rare. In the United States, however, I am much more likely to [argumento original sem suporte suficiente] find these types of professionals and I believe that they will give me the motivation and knowledge that I would not be able to have otherwise. It will be outstanding for me and I will be able to apply the acquired skills in my country.
To summarize, this exchange program will provide me with a great opportunity for development in many aspects of my professional research and academic career. Since I will acquire new specialized knowledge that I would not find in my country, upon my [estilo] return to Brazil, I will be able to collaborate in [colocação] Brazil's development by applying this knowledge to my future academic and corporate career, as well as in Brazilian education, as a professor, which I am to become.