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I never have been abroad yet, but I want to travel abroad to know news places and to practice the english. I think will be a useful experience. I hope to travel abroad as soon as possible.
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Hi Folk,

In 2010 I was in the USA.

The experience was amazing, even though, I was learning English just one year, I enjoyed so much and I hadn't any problem with comunication.

Hugs,
Eduardo
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Eduardo Souza escreveu:Hi Folk,

In 2010 I was in the USA.

The experience was amazing, even though, I was learning English just one year, I enjoyed so much and I hadn't any problem with comunication.

Hugs,
Eduardo


Eduardo,

I would like to suggest a few minor improvements in your post, in the form of a rewrite. Please compare both and let me know if you have any questions.

In 2010 I was in the USA. The experience was amazing, enven though I had studied English for only one year I did not have any problem communicating. I enjoyed my time there so much, that I will always remember the trip.

I hope this helps you, please let me know.
Hi Bill,

Your suggestions always help me improve my English!

Thank you for your help!

Hugs,
Eduardo
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Not yet. But I intend to go to USA or maybe Canada 3 years from now. I wish the world wouldn't end in 2012 so that I could go abroad.

That's all!!
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tomas escreveu:Not yet. But I intend to go to USA or maybe Canada 3 years from now. I wish the world wouldn't end in 2012 so that I could go abroad.

That's all!!


Thomas,

I have one extremely minor suggestion, when writing proper English one should always spell out a number of ten or less, therefore your post should read "... or Canada three years from now....". Otherwise an excellet post.
I have been abroad for a while. I lived in Amsterdam for about 6 months and it was an amazing experience i would suggest everyone does. It really helped to improve my Dutch (the obvious reason why I travelled to Holland was to learn Dutch) and it was so much fun. I rented a studio apartment in Amsterdam, it had everything i needed. Living in Amsterdam was so different to what I was used to.
I never been abroad. Perhaps in the next year I has the opportunity to go to South Africa or maybe to Canada. It's too expensive to me, but I'm seeking ways to make this dream come true.
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zacbay escreveu:I have been abroad for a while. I lived in Amsterdam for about 6 months and it was an amazing experience i would suggest everyone does. It really helped to improve my Dutch (the obvious reason why I travelled to Holland was to learn Dutch) and it was so much fun. I rented a studio apartment in Amsterdam, it had everything i needed. Living in Amsterdam was so different to what I was used to.



Zacbay,

The only suggestions that I have for your post is that you always need to capitalize the word "I".

Otherwise excellent vocabulary and construction.
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Marcos Rios escreveu:I never been abroad. Perhaps in the next year I has the opportunity to go to South Africa or maybe to Canada. It's too expensive to me, but I'm seeking ways to make this dream come true.


Marcos,

I would like for you to consider the following rewrite, and compare it to your original post. Please determine why I made the changes that I did, and let me know if you understand or if you have questions. Thank you for allowing me to try and help you in your studies of English.

" I have never been abroad. I can not afford to go at this time, but I'm seeking ways to make this dream come true. Perhaps next year I will have the opportunity to go to South Africa, or possibly Canada."