w.slayman escreveu:Marcos Rios escreveu:I never been abroad. Perhaps in the next year I has the opportunity to go to South Africa or maybe to Canada. It's too expensive to me, but I'm seeking ways to make this dream come true.
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" I have never been abroad. I can not afford to go at this time, but I'm seeking ways to make this dream come true. Perhaps next year I will have the opportunity to go to South Africa, or possibly Canada."
Thank you very much! I truly need help to learn write. I have a reasonable reading, but almost never can pratice my writen. So, excuse me for my bad English.