Flávia Gabriela escreveu:No, I haven't ever dreamed in inglish. But a few times I dreamed with a complete piece of work of classic music. Even an opera. Quite marvellous! I tryied to reproduce it on my mind after I waked up, but it lasted just a little. The melody sounded so sharp in certain moments that I couldn't sing. If the brain could be registred in the future maybe I'll have lots of contributes to do. I have already dreamed about architecture and furniture designs. Even waked up, daydreaming, I've seen in my mind quite exquisites shoes and awsome car designs. I'm a high top artist in this lack of imagination.
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"No I have never dreamed in English. But a few times have I dreamed with a complete work of classical music, and once with an opera in the dream, the experience was quite marvellous. I tried to reproduce the music in in my mind after I awakened, but the memory lasted only a short time. The melody was so sharp at certain times that I could not sing along.
In the future if the brain's thoughts could be registered while sleeping maybe I'll be able to make contributions in architecture, furniture design, shoe design and automotive styling as I have dreamed about exqisite examples in each of these fields."
Thank you for considering my suggestions, I hope you are able to profit from the rewrite.