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The get-together in my family is very simple. Usually is in my grandmothers’ houses. All the family gather. My father and my uncles always stay outside, play trick and the other card games, have a barbecue, drink a lot of beer, wine and so on. They also tell jokes, sometimes it’s fun but sometimes is very boring too. My aunts, my mother and my grandmother usually stay in the kitchen or inside the house. They have a lunch, wash the dishes, fun a lot and catch up. I usually stay with my cousins and we do several things. We talk about everything, watch TV, play games, help the men or women when it’s necessary. When I don’t stay with my cousins, I stay in the kitchen helping the women. The children in the family are always bothering everybody and it’s very boring sometime, but depends on the children. Sometimes, there is a person that is a party pooper or a moody person, and then, can happen some discussion. This is not common, but sometimes happens. When the get-together is in my other grandmother’s house it’s smaller. I think it’s better because is more comfortable and everyone make themselves at home. The get-together in my family usually happens on holidays. We lunch at my grandmother’s house in Prudentópolis and then, we dinner at my other grandmother’s house in Rio Azul.
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