Correção de texto: Origem do origami
- YanG123
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Olá.
Estou escrevendo um texto sobre a origem do origami e estou meio inseguro na introdução.
Poderiam verificar e fazer as devidas correções ?
"Many historians believe that origami is created together with paper in China, in the year 105 B.C.
Then, budists disclosed the fabrication guidance in VII century for asiatic countries, and it was in Japan, the place this art evolved. The most ancient record about origami was a poem from Ihara Saikaku in 1680, and first book with folding instructions is from 1797 (“Hidem Sembazuru Orikata” from Akisato Rito)."
Agradeço, desde já, a atenção dispensada.
Estou escrevendo um texto sobre a origem do origami e estou meio inseguro na introdução.
Poderiam verificar e fazer as devidas correções ?
"Many historians believe that origami is created together with paper in China, in the year 105 B.C.
Then, budists disclosed the fabrication guidance in VII century for asiatic countries, and it was in Japan, the place this art evolved. The most ancient record about origami was a poem from Ihara Saikaku in 1680, and first book with folding instructions is from 1797 (“Hidem Sembazuru Orikata” from Akisato Rito)."
Agradeço, desde já, a atenção dispensada.
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- gian2hard
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Many historians believe the origins of origami to be linked to the invention of paper round 105 B.C in China.
Nevertheless, it was the Buddhists who spread the secrets of papermaking process in the VII century throughout Asia, but it was in Japan where the art form evolved. The oldest record pertaining to the origami art is a 1680s poem by Ihara Saikaku, and the first book containing folding instructions is the "Hidem Sembazuru Orikata", 1797 by Akisato Rito.
Nada mal, aqui está uma forma mais polida! Abraço
Nevertheless, it was the Buddhists who spread the secrets of papermaking process in the VII century throughout Asia, but it was in Japan where the art form evolved. The oldest record pertaining to the origami art is a 1680s poem by Ihara Saikaku, and the first book containing folding instructions is the "Hidem Sembazuru Orikata", 1797 by Akisato Rito.
Nada mal, aqui está uma forma mais polida! Abraço