Tradução resumo de monografia
Estou fazendo a tradução de resumo da minha monografia. Por favor, vocês poderiam verificar se está parte está correta?
O objetivo deste estudo foi avaliar os aspectos nutricionais em crianças com DRGE em um hospital público de São Luís-MA. Participaram desta pesquisa, 40 crianças de ambos os sexos com idade de 52,25 ± 35,72 meses (média ± desvio-padrão) com diagnóstico clínico de DRGE. Foram utilizados como instrumentos para coleta dos dados os prontuários, cartão de vacinação da criança e os questionários.
The objective of this study was to evaluate the nutritional aspects in children with GERD in a public hospital of Is Luis-MA. Participated in this study, 40 children of both sexes with age of 52.25 ± 35.72 months (mean ± standard deviation) with clinical diagnosis of GERD. Were used as instruments for the collection of data records, card of vaccination of the child and questionnaires.
O objetivo deste estudo foi avaliar os aspectos nutricionais em crianças com DRGE em um hospital público de São Luís-MA. Participaram desta pesquisa, 40 crianças de ambos os sexos com idade de 52,25 ± 35,72 meses (média ± desvio-padrão) com diagnóstico clínico de DRGE. Foram utilizados como instrumentos para coleta dos dados os prontuários, cartão de vacinação da criança e os questionários.
The objective of this study was to evaluate the nutritional aspects in children with GERD in a public hospital of Is Luis-MA. Participated in this study, 40 children of both sexes with age of 52.25 ± 35.72 months (mean ± standard deviation) with clinical diagnosis of GERD. Were used as instruments for the collection of data records, card of vaccination of the child and questionnaires.
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minha sugestão:
The objective of this study was to evaluate the nutritional aspects of children with GERD in a public hospital in São Luís, Maranhão. 40 children of both sexes, with clinical diagnosis of GERD, participated in this study, averaging 52.25 months old with a standard deviation of 35.72 months. The study used the child's vaccination card and questionnaires for the collection of data.
The objective of this study was to evaluate the nutritional aspects of children with GERD in a public hospital in São Luís, Maranhão. 40 children of both sexes, with clinical diagnosis of GERD, participated in this study, averaging 52.25 months old with a standard deviation of 35.72 months. The study used the child's vaccination card and questionnaires for the collection of data.
@MYN: Uma outra opção para a frase final: Child's vaccination card and questionnaires were used for collection of data.
@ Dlr: would it change the meaning if I used "... for collecting data"?
@ Dlr: would it change the meaning if I used "... for collecting data"?
Two little things I noticed in Dir's otherwise perfect suggestion:
In opening a sentence, don't use numerals: spell out "Forty" in place of "40."
Somehow you lost "prontuários" (records) from the list of items used to collect data.
Regards
In opening a sentence, don't use numerals: spell out "Forty" in place of "40."
Somehow you lost "prontuários" (records) from the list of items used to collect data.
Regards
As Homer Simpson would say, "Doh!" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=khSIYmTzt6UHenry Cunha escreveu:Two little things I noticed in Dir's otherwise perfect suggestion:
In opening a sentence, don't use numerals: spell out "Forty" in place of "40."
Somehow you lost "prontuários" (records) from the list of items used to collect data.
Regards
Foram aceitas todas as sugestões, brigada a todos, em especial ao Dlr.
Concluindo, as sugestões:
Forty children of both sexes, with clinical diagnosis of GERD, participated in this study, averaging 52.25 months old with a standard deviation of 35.72 months.
and
The study used the records, the child's vaccination card and questionnaires as instruments for the collection of data.
Regards Yasmyn. kisses!!!
Concluindo, as sugestões:
Forty children of both sexes, with clinical diagnosis of GERD, participated in this study, averaging 52.25 months old with a standard deviation of 35.72 months.
and
The study used the records, the child's vaccination card and questionnaires as instruments for the collection of data.
Regards Yasmyn. kisses!!!