What are your plans for your next vacation?

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Avatar do usuário w.slayman 110
Peu_Pedrotti escreveu:My plan to this vacation are study more english and review some graduation's subjects, because in the first half of this year i take many subjects and don't enough time to study all of them. But i'll intend to do fun things such as party, to go out with my friends and more ...

this is it !

hugs !


Peu,

I would like to suggest that your post be rewritten to read something like this. "My plans for this vacation are to study English and review some of the subjects from the first half of the year. I took too many subjects and did not have enough time to study all of them. But I still intend to do some fun thinks such as going out with my friends, and partying, etectera."

To a native English speaker like my self the rewrite would make more sense and be easier to follow.
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Avatar do usuário w.slayman 110
sôsso escreveu:I intend in my next vancation go to florida and make a trip of ship by caribe,


Sosso,

Please consider this rewrite of your sentence. "During my next vacation I intend to go to Florida, and take a cruise ship tour of the Caribbean."

With a little work you can be using english like an expert.
Avatar do usuário w.slayman 110
irb2012 escreveu:My plans this vacation are to learn English and drinking beer with friends



Irb2012,

To make your sentence read like native English speaker wrote it please consider this. "My plans for this vacation are to learn English, and drink beer with friends."

Save one for me. :lol:
Avatar do usuário w.slayman 110
Ester escreveu:Hello Everybody!
My plans for the next vacation is going to New York on December.
I hope so!


Ester,

Please consider these two minor corrections. Use the plural are instead of the singular is, and the correct preposition to use here is in as opposed to on.

Otherwise excellent construction and a clearly consice sentence. Well done!
Avatar do usuário w.slayman 110
diego.andrade escreveu:My plans for my next vacation is to travel but I am in doubt about the place. Maybe i will to Buenos Aires.

I'm already doing savings.


May I suggest two changes. Use the plural are instead of is and use I have doubts instead of I am in doubt.

Otherwise very good.
Avatar do usuário w.slayman 110
diego.andrade escreveu:My plans for my next vacation is to travel but I am in doubt about the place. Maybe i will to Buenos Aires.

I'm already doing savings.


May I suggest two changes to your first sentence. Use the plural are instead of is and use I have doubts instead of I am in doubt.

Also I would suggest that use, "I'm already saving."

Otherwise very good.
Avatar do usuário w.slayman 110
weidt escreveu:My vacations plans are travel with my boyfriend and take advantage of it to learn about some programming languages.


Weidt,

Your sentence can be improved by making two changes. Please consider using to travel and delete some as unnecessary.

Otherwise very nice.
Avatar do usuário w.slayman 110
gui_bgo escreveu:Hey folks!

I would like to go to England or Canada to improve my English abilities and enjoy those countries but I know that I won't be able to do it in 2011, then I hope I will be able to travel to Argentina to enjoy my spare time with some friends and learn more about that culture (even though I don't speak Spanish...)!! Even If I couldn't travel to Argentina, I might save some money to travel to England or Canada in 2012!! I've been dreaming about it for years. :roll:

Guii.


Guii,

As a native English speaker I can only come up with two nitpicks which are, you to not need parentheses, use a coma instead and elimimate the multiple punctuation marks.

Otherwise A+ work and very nice indeed.
w.slayman escreveu:
gui_bgo escreveu:Hey folks!

I would like to go to England or Canada to improve my English abilities and enjoy those countries but I know that I won't be able to do it in 2011, then I hope I will be able to travel to Argentina to enjoy my spare time with some friends and learn more about that culture (even though I don't speak Spanish...)!! Even If I couldn't travel to Argentina, I might save some money to travel to England or Canada in 2012!! I've been dreaming about it for years. :roll:

Guii.


Guii,

As a native English speaker I can only come up with two nitpicks which are, you to not need parentheses, use a coma instead and elimimate the multiple punctuation marks.

Otherwise A+ work and very nice indeed.


Thanks again Mr. Slayman! I always know that I need to eliminate the multiple punctuation marks... Thanks for your advice. :D
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w.slayman escreveu:
gui_bgo escreveu:Hey folks!

I would like to go to England or Canada to improve my English abilities and enjoy those countries but I know that I won't be able to do it in 2011, then I hope I will be able to travel to Argentina to enjoy my spare time with some friends and learn more about that culture (even though I don't speak Spanish...)!! Even If I couldn't travel to Argentina, I might save some money to travel to England or Canada in 2012!! I've been dreaming about it for years. :roll:

Guii.


Guii,

As a native English speaker I can only come up with two nitpicks which are, you to not need parentheses, use a coma instead and elimimate the multiple punctuation marks.

Otherwise A+ work and very nice indeed.


Thanks again Mr. Slayman! I always knew that I need to eliminate the multiple punctuation marks. Thanks for your advice. :D

I hope you keep doing this job!!

Guii.