I appreciate your words about my writting, it gives more confidence to keep up the good work!
Let me understand the reasons of your suggestions. You suggested the change: "... and help from my friends on the forums"
. I am able to see you are correct and I want to see why my version is awkward. I wrote: "... and helps from forum's friends"
. In my version, does the forum have friends? Because if it does, my version is outright wrong. Well, you understood what I tried to write despite my confused phrase.
In the second paragraph, if I want to use the term "another"
? In this case, must I write "Another were online games..."
Thank you so much!!