What is an Administrator?

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Administradores são profissionais que organizam, planejam e orientam o uso dos recursos financeiros, físicos, tecnológicos e humanos das empresas, buscando soluções para todo tipo de problema administrativo. Criam métodos, planejam atividades, organizam o funcionamento dos vários setores da empresa, calculam despesas e garantem a perfeita circulação de informações e orientações. O objetivo é evitar falhas de comunicação, escassez ou excesso de empregados, gastos desnecessários ou outros problemas que gerem desperdício, ineficiência, prejuízo à produção etc.
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Administrator are those professionals who plan and guide the financial, physical, technological and human resources of some company, they look for solving any kind of administrative problem. They create methods, plan activities, organize the operation in the several sectors of some company, they compute the expenses and guarantee the proper functioning of the outstanding message and orientations. The goal is to avoid communication failures, shortage or excess of employees, unnecessary expenses or other problems which lead to wastage, inefficiency, production loss etc.

Well, I used Google translator to translate about 3 or 4 words that I didn't know, but I set up this little version myself ! :D
Please correct me!

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Here follow my suggestions:

Administrators are professionals who plan and guide the usage of financial, physical, technological and human resources of a company; they look for solving any kind of administrative problem. They create methods, plan activities, organize the operation of several sectors of the company; they calculate expenses and guarantee the proper delivery of information. The goal is to avoid miscommunication, shortage or excess of employees, unnecessary expenses and other problems which lead to wastage, inefficiency, production loss etc.


(1) Administrator is singular. If you want to use the verb form 'are', you must use the plural: administrators.
(2) They guide the usage of the resources and not the resources themselves.
(3) Messages and orientation are kinds of information, so you might as well use just one word.
(4) Miscommunication sounds better to me than communication failures, but the expression you used is not wrong.

Other than these small points, good job!

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Avatar do usuário Marcelo Pias 640 1 2 14
I really appreciate your help! :D