What is your favorite city or region in Brazil and why?

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w.slayman 110
BrunoCosta escreveu:Salvador!Beautiful place,beautiful beachies.There a lot to do,you are never bored walking there,'cause the ocean fresh air does never aloud it.So if want be happy,one of the cities to visit is Salvador da Bahia! :geek:

Bruno see what you think about this.

"Salvador! A beautiful city with beautiful beaches where you never need to be bored because the fresh ocean air is so invigorating. Salvador da Bahia is a city where you can relax, enjoy life and be happy."

I think you should strived to use the more difficult compex sentences that native American English speakers normally use.
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Michele Félix
Hello, I'm from Manaus, Brazil to my favorite place, the city offers a variety of entertainment both day and night, fun people, regional parties like the Boi Manaus are attractions to delight those who visit us. Apart from the beauty of Fauna and Flora. So I invite you to meet my wonderful city and when they do not forget to take a bath in the Igarapé.

w.slayman 110
Michele Félix escreveu:Hello, I'm from Manaus, Brazil to my favorite place, the city offers a variety of entertainment both day and night, fun people, regional parties like the Boi Manaus are attractions to delight those who visit us. Apart from the beauty of Fauna and Flora. So I invite you to meet my wonderful city and when they do not forget to take a bath in the Igarapé.
Michele,

I would like to suggest a few changes to make your post read something like this. "Hello, I am from Manaus, Brazil which is my favorite place. The city offers a varity of entertainment both night and day, our people are a lot of fun and visitors are delighted by regional parties like the Boi Manaus. In the immediate are are many places where one can enjoy the fauna and flora. So I would like to invite you to visit my wonderful city, and to urge you to take a bath in the Igrape while you are here."
I hope your studies of English gain from this post.

By the way, one of the places I most want to visit in Brazil, is Manaus, this coming January and February we plan on visiting Foz do Iguacu , Paraty, and Rio, as well as living in Sao Paulo, or Jundiai. Maybe in 2012, Manaus and the Pantanal.

w.slayman 110
Michele Félix escreveu:Hello, I'm from Manaus, Brazil to my favorite place, the city offers a variety of entertainment both day and night, fun people, regional parties like the Boi Manaus are attractions to delight those who visit us. Apart from the beauty of Fauna and Flora. So I invite you to meet my wonderful city and when they do not forget to take a bath in the Igarapé.
Michele,

I would like to suggest a few changes to make your post read something like this. "Hello, I am from Manaus, Brazil which is my favorite place. The city offers a varity of entertainment both night and day, our people are a lot of fun and visitors are delighted by regional parties like the Boi Manaus. In the immediate are are many places where one can enjoy the fauna and flora. So I would like to invite you to visit my wonderful city, and to urge you to take a bath in the Igrape while you are here."

I hope your studies of English gain from this post.

By the way, one of the places I most want to visit in Brazil, is Manaus, this coming January and February we plan on visiting Foz do Iguacu , Paraty, and Rio, as well as living in Sao Paulo, or Jundiai. Maybe in 2012, Manaus and the Pantanal.

Michele Félix
Thank you Bill. I hope to count with your help!
When you come to Manaus will be your tourist guide.rsr

Kiss and Hugs.

BrunoCosta
w.slayman escreveu:
BrunoCosta escreveu:Salvador!Beautiful place,beautiful beachies.There a lot to do,you are never bored walking there,'cause the ocean fresh air does never aloud it.So if want be happy,one of the cities to visit is Salvador da Bahia! :geek:

Bruno see what you think about this.

"Salvador! A beautiful city with beautiful beaches where you never need to be bored because the fresh ocean air is so invigorating. Salvador da Bahia is a city where you can relax, enjoy life and be happy."

I think you should strived to use the more difficult compex sentences that native American English speakers normally use.


Thanks again Bill! As a brazillian i just want you to know that i do my best everytime and i'm always trying to improving the writing.You're always welcome!
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diego.andrade
São Paulo, it's a quite city, several kinds of people, Many things to do how: shopping mall, theather, disco, bowling and so on.

We love work in São Paulo. I was born in São Paulo so e love it. I am very proud to live here!

gui_bgo
Hello!

I have never been to other cities... I have lived in Sao Paulo since I was born, then it's my favourite city. ROFL.

Guii.

w.slayman 110
diego.andrade escreveu:São Paulo, it's a quite city, several kinds of people, Many things to do how: shopping mall, theather, disco, bowling and so on.

We love work in São Paulo. I was born in São Paulo so e love it. I am very proud to live here!
Diego,

I would like to suggest this rewrite for your post.


Sao Paulo, its quite a city, with a multi ethnic population and many things to do such as shopping malls, theaters, discos, bowling alleys, and so on.

I was born in Sao Paulo so I love the city and am very proud to live and work here.


I hope this helps your studies of English

w.slayman 110
gui_bgo escreveu:Hello!

I have never been to other cities... I have lived in Sao Paulo since I was born, then it's my favourite city. ROFL.

Guii.
Guii,

May I suggest that you use so or therefore in place of then, "... therefore it's my ..."

gui_bgo
w.slayman escreveu:
gui_bgo escreveu:Hello!

I have never been to other cities... I have lived in Sao Paulo since I was born, then it's my favourite city. ROFL.

Guii.
Guii,

May I suggest that you use so or therefore in place of then, "... therefore it's my ..."
Thanks so much Mr. Slayman! I thought I could use "so", but I didn't...

I didn't know the word "therefore".

Guii.

isabelladevonne
My favorite city in Brazil is my city. Well, I could say São Paulo, Rio de Janeiro, but I just like so much my city: here there are some places to fun, like shopping mall (and now it's opening a new like that, but that's only for prettier rich people), ahn.. there's the center of the city, that we can shop when we want (or when we have money to do it haha), there are pubs and clubs for you to go whatever with your family or friends, there are too places for you to take your children, like playgrounds etc, and we can find funny here, that's the most special for us that live in here (:

Ravenna 85 3
Sampa (São Paulo) is my favourite city.
My favourite regions are the South-est and South of Brazil.

See you around!

Marcio_Farias 12570 1 23 212
Southeast or southwest?

erilaine brito
hello!!!my favorite city is Jundiaí...rsrssr in São Paulo State!!!!!
I'm starting in English and would like to correct my mistakes, please!
help me.
thanks. :P

w.slayman 110
erilaine brito escreveu:hello!!!my favorite city is Jundiaí...rsrssr in São Paulo State!!!!!
I'm starting in English and would like to correct my mistakes, please!
help me.
thanks. :P
Erilaine,

Welcome to the forums, I am Bill Slayman, an American who lives in Pensacola, Florida, with my wife, Cristina Panizza, who is a Brazilian from Jundiai, SP. It's a small world indeed. A good friend of my wife and myself, also named Cristina, teaches English in Jundiai, and has a restaurant, called the Buon Giorno Cafe located at Rua Sen Fonseca, 1142, Centro, if you see her please say hello for my wife and myself.

I will rewrite your post making corrections where needed, and ask that you let me know if you understand why I made the changes that I did, and if not let me know and perhaps I can answer your questions.

" Hello! My favorite city is Jundiai, in the state of Sao Paulo. I am just starting to learn English and would like someone to please correct my mistakes and help me.

Thanks"


I hope my introduction put you at ease, and that the rewrite helps you in your studies, I am here to help all who want my assistance, so just ask.

Istvan Z. Janki
My favorit city in Brazil is Curitiba. It's an excellent city. It has everything I need. There are shopping centers, soccer teams( there are three ot them) volleyball team, theater, nice restaurants, discos and night clubs in the city. And the city has a very modern public transportation system. I really love that city

leandrocs1310 25
Actually, I've never traveled to anywhere but Espírito Santo (I live in Minas), but I think I like a lot Curitiba, I see there on the photos and Curitiba really seems like a developed country inside a large developing country. So I'd like very much to live in South of Brazil, especially because there are a lot of immigrants, and I love everything that comes from abroad.

Adriano Japan 905 2 19
Ravenna escreveu:Sampa (São Paulo) is my favourite city.
My favourite regions are the South-est and South of Brazil.

See you around!

Gustavo Dias 25
My favorite city where I like to travel, is to Camboriú; Situated at the State of Santa Catarina; It is a beach touristic city. That place is the best beach I've ever known to spend the vacations at the beach. On vacations, a lot of Argentians, Bolovians, people from Uruguay... go there. You hear a lot people speacking Spanish everywhere.

Claiene
I prefer the south, because is more cold than other region.

w.slayman 110
Claiene escreveu:I prefer the south, because is more cold than other region.

Claiene,

Please consider the changes I included in my rewrite of your post and see if you understand why I made them and let me know if you have any questions.

"I prefer the south, because there is more cold weather than the other regions.

Welcome to English Experts and please feel free to ask me for help.

oto_rodrigues
Hello there!
I´m from Bahia, a Brazilian state with so many beautiful cities - most of them by the sea -, but please allow me to mention a city located in Rio Grande do Sul, another gorgeous Brazilian state. It is its capital, Porto Alegre. I had the privilege to live there for over ten years, and I tell you there´s something there that makes it very hard to leave this marvelous city. Some says it´s the people, some says it´s the air. Anyway, Porto Alegre is in my heart forever.

GustavoFella
Oh, I love live in Curitiba, it's weather is diversified. Has many Tour Points, and a Coletive Transportation to be a example for all the another Brazilian capitals.

Oh! Sorry! My English is so bad.

w.slayman 110
GustavoFella escreveu:Oh, I love live in Curitiba, it's weather is diversified. Has many Tour Points, and a Coletive Transportation to be a example for all the another Brazilian capitals.

Oh! Sorry! My English is so bad.
Gustavo,

Please consider the following rewrite and let me know if you agree and understand why I made the changes.

Oh, I love to live in Curitiba, the city's weather is varied, it has many interesting points for tourists, and a public transportation system that is an excellent example for all the other Brazilian state capitals.

I hope that you can profit from this rewrite.

Vinícius Garcez
What is your favorite city or region in Brazil and why?
I Love my own region. I live in Anápolis-Go. My town is between two capital, which are Goiânia and Brasília. What is our advantage? Here there is no twist, earthquake, floods, strong rains or others complications.

Sahmid
All Brazil is beautiful.We can't say that Rio or São Paulo is good.Brazil is the best region in Brazil, :D

Diego Francora
I really love Sao Paulo, but I also like Curitiba, Goiania and Salvador. Brazil is beautiful!!

Jorge Lucas
Well, I live in João Pessoa-PB, but I was born in Guarulhos-SP. Oh, and my dad's family live in São Pedro da Aldeia-RJ.
So, my all life was in these cities. It's curious but my favorite city is São Pedro da Aldeia and all the cities near there. The weather is awesome, sometimes is hot and sometimes is cold, and the beachs are so beautiful, the water is very clear that we can see our feet.
I pretend meet the south of Brazil, because everybody say that is wonderful. But for now I prefer Região dos Lagos in Rio. :D

Gúuh
Certainly, the southern region. Cuz I love the cold weather and there, people are so beautiful and the nature is amazing. European-style buildings, crops from different parts of Europe are a mix with a unique and particularly brazilian way of live the life.

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