gaby_freitas escreveu:I really would like to travel to Japan or our dear USA. I do love their culture! Japan have a beautiful culture which mix the tradicinal and the modern at the same time....and the citys have a wonderful energy, the people are so...colorful
At USA we have the glamour, happy people and of course people that speaks the language i love. USA is my first option of move, because i could practice my english,well, it's not the best,i know, but i do my best everyday,studying, talking with myself at home, watching english tv programs, things like that....that's it!
Gaby, I know that we aren't in a formal conversation but I suggest you to always put the letter I from the subject in a capital letter.
And as we're all here to study and improve our English skills, I'm going to show some minor errors you've done if you don't mind:
-Tradicinal. You've just forgot the "o". Traditional.
-Citys. The correct form is cities.
And I think if you had written your second sentence like below, in my opinion, would sound more better:
"At the USA we have the glamour and happy people who speaks the language that I love..."
You guys can correct me if I've said something wrong.