Correção de frases: "I want", "we must", etc.

Olá amigos(as)

Estou treinando a minha Writing e queria saber se escrevi corretamente e se caso estiver errado, qual a melhor forma de se escrever e se possível me sugerir alguma collocation.

1 - I Want the Changed of World for my family
2 - I Want the Changed my life in my work
3 - I Have to Change the World
4 - We Must Change World
5 - My friend changed the world

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Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49085 21 73 1138
O contexto é insuficiente, mas mesmo assim, aí vão minhas dicas:

1 - I want to change the world for my family.
2 - I want to change my life at work.
3 - I have to change the world.
4 - We must change the world.
5 - My friend changed the world.

Todas as opções acima estão corretas.


Bons estudos!
Olá Donay

Eu estava estudando suas sugestões e quero entender algumas alterações que você fez nas minhas frases.

I Want the Changed of World for my family

Porque você trocou o THE pelo TO e o OF pelo THE ?

I want to change the world for my family.

Valew
Avatar do usuário PPAULO 39195 6 32 684
Because it doens´t makes sense in English.
Would be an awkward sentence similar to "eu quero o mudado do mundo para minha família."
This time Google Translator would have make a good job to you; since if you had typed there "eu quero mudar o mundo para minha familia" the translated text would be the same one of Donay´s answer.

Unless you tought another thing in Portuguese.


The particle "THE" (definite article) goes before a noun, not before the verb (mudar - change), if the verb was correctly translated.

Changed world would be "mundo mudado" or something like that.

So, indefinite article "a" (um) world would be a better choice, don´t you think?
Então estaria correto disser o seguinte.

I am to manager the company
I caught the cheese on freezer
Mais frases que escrevi.

I want travel to brazil
I want travel to the united states
Avatar do usuário PPAULO 39195 6 32 684
Not really.
It would be "I am going to manage the company./I will manage the company."
(slightly more usual would be "run the company."


I caught a wheel of cheese in/on the freezer (or in the refrigerator).
[in- inside the freezer, on-over the freezer]

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Now this may help sometime, the cheese you talked about, is in general way.
Most/many times you need to "quantify" it.

(cheese is uncountable so it have to be determined, if it is a piece, a chunk, a slice, a wheel/a round of cheese/a block of cheese etc)

http://www.thenibble.com/reviews/main/c ... ssary3.asp


http://esl.about.com/od/grammarforbegin ... ucount.htm

http://www.learn-english-online.org/Les ... sson37.htm