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- Camila_880
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I'm passionate about England, the culture, art and so much more, My dream is to visit there one day. The weather doesn't bother me at all and I think it's a fascinating country.
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- Simon Vasconcelos
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Camila, seu texto está correto. Apenas deve haver uma correção na pontuação antes de "My dream". Em vez da vírgula, seria um ponto.
Contudo, eu fiquei com uma dúvida. Para o texto soar mais fluido ou natural, eu pensei em trocar "the culture" por "its culture". Não tenho certeza de que essa minha observação faça total sentido. Então, espero outros pontos de vista sobre esse detalhe.
Contudo, eu fiquei com uma dúvida. Para o texto soar mais fluido ou natural, eu pensei em trocar "the culture" por "its culture". Não tenho certeza de que essa minha observação faça total sentido. Então, espero outros pontos de vista sobre esse detalhe.
- PPAULO
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There are two possibilities here:
"I'm passionate about England, its culture, art and so much more, "
"I'm passionate about England, its culture, art and so much more, "
The first meaning the writer is fond of England's culture and art.
The second sentence, to my thinking, would be that the interests of the author are things like culture, art and so much more, along with all things England.
Here culture, art, for instance, not necessarily the British culture and art, could be art and culture in general.
"I'm passionate about England, its culture, art and so much more, "
"I'm passionate about England, its culture, art and so much more, "
The first meaning the writer is fond of England's culture and art.
The second sentence, to my thinking, would be that the interests of the author are things like culture, art and so much more, along with all things England.
Here culture, art, for instance, not necessarily the British culture and art, could be art and culture in general.
- PPAULO
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Actually I meant:
"I'm passionate about England, its culture, art and so much more, "
Vs
"I'm passionate about England, culture, art and so much more, "
Granted, the orignal post had "the culture" that somehow "links" it to England, so we could think of the culture of England. But some readers could think it a bit ambiguous.
I think "its" sounds/seems more idiomatic, then "art and mouch more" working as a parallell structure (that is, we think of "its art and so much more").
Excuse me for repeating the first sentence verbatim in my example from the previous reply.
"I'm passionate about England, its culture, art and so much more, "
Vs
"I'm passionate about England, culture, art and so much more, "
Granted, the orignal post had "the culture" that somehow "links" it to England, so we could think of the culture of England. But some readers could think it a bit ambiguous.
I think "its" sounds/seems more idiomatic, then "art and mouch more" working as a parallell structure (that is, we think of "its art and so much more").
Excuse me for repeating the first sentence verbatim in my example from the previous reply.
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