Correção de texto: Foreign Accent

Hi Roger, seguem algumas sugestões e opções:

I have a friend and she is American. She has been living here in Brazil for four years, her Portuguese is very good. especially her pronunciation, she even has our accent. However, her grammar is not ON the same level as her pronunciation. When she talks we can realize some mistakes which show she is not Brazilian. Especially the conjugations, because conjugations in Portuguese are pretty difficult. I must be the same when I am speaking in English. Some native speakers have praised my pronunciation, I have been working really hard on it. But they always remind me that my grammar (or my grammar skills) and my sentences structure are not good THE STRUCTURE of MY SENTENCES IS NOT SO (THAT) GOOD and I should improve IT. I should get some books and read, because I do not have patience (or HAVE NO PATIENCE) TO read on (from) the Internet.

Note: take into account some options are just style. Other things such as capitalizing the word Portuguese is not optional. Internet is a word written capitalized in American-Canadian English, I thought it was more correct that way.

See you around!