Draylson I must say your text was good, you know, Donay is a very experienced and observant guy. And one always will have something to fine-tune, that is a fact.
Maybe that helps with describing people in the future, including yourself.
Maybe you like reading something about how to describe people.http://aliciateacher2.files.wordpress.c ... 737_o1.jpghttp://www.speakenglish.co.uk/vocab/describing_people
But then, perhaps you like to watch some descriptions. If you are more of an auditory or visual learner these clips are for you.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5n2ma_4sy_8https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-tGuMh9UZy4
Well, it´s a beggining, ain´t it?