Correção de texto: unfriend on facebook

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Hey how is it going?

The internet today is a topic with lot of polemic, some people take it very serious the social media. I have just talked with some friend that has argued with someone because her accidentally unfriended that person on facebook, look what a crazy situation, nowdays the facebook is a topic so serious that some people are able to ged real angry if someaone unfriend they on facebook.

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Avatar do usuário PPAULO 39205 6 32 684
There are a lot of polemics [polemics, plural] around the Internet [capital I] today. Some people take social media very seriously [I redid it here, including the word order at some places].
I have just talked with *a friend that has confronted someone else because she accidentally unfriended that person on Facebook. Just imagine, what a crazy situation; nowadays Facebook is a so serious thing that some people are able to get real angry if [&] someaone unfriend them. [a]

Internet is not a topic to me, at least not in this text.
*"some friends" were expected here, or just "friends". Anyway, since you used the verb "has" I decided for "a friend".
[a]I left out the final "on Facebook", since it was specified beforehand.

[&]someone.
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Avatar do usuário PPAULO 39205 6 32 684
Today I noticed that the "I" of "internet" on The Economist was in small letter, so ignore the previous capitalizing of it that I did.

Internet isn´t capitalized anymore when it´s said in a general way. Only when it adjetives other word, in the beggining of a paragraph and talking about it in its very infant days.