Correção de texto "What you do at your school? "

What you do at your school? (How many subjects do you take? What are they? How long are the classes? What is your daily schedule during the school year? Start with when you wake-up and discuss only one typical day’s schedule.) Are you able to choose courses at your school? If so, which courses did you choose, and why?

At school I have 11 subjects, they are: portuguese, biology, history, geography, chemistry, math, physics, physical education, philosophy and sociology. Each one of my classes last 40 minutes. On my school we aren’t able to choose what subjects we want to take, they are predetermined.
On a typical day of my school year I wake up at 06:20 a.m., have breakfast and go to school by bus. The classes start at 07:30 a.m., e go till 09:35 a.m., when we have a little break and the classes restart at 10:00 a.m. and go until the midday. I go back home and have lunch, then I take a rest up to 01:30 p.m., when I start doing the homework. By 15:30 I have a lunch and walk to the gym, where I stay until 05:30, I go back home and play some video game or do some reading. At 07:00 p.m. I go to the jiu-jitsu practice, it finishes at 08:30 p.m., then I go home, have dinner, take a shower, and around 09:30 p.m. I’m at the bed sleeping.
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At school I have 11 subjects, they are: portuguese, biology, history, geography, chemistry, math, physics, physical education, philosophy and sociology. Each one of my classes last 40 minutes. At my school, we aren’t allowed to choose what subjects we want to take, they are predetermined.
On a typical day of my school year I wake up at 06:20 a.m., have breakfast and go to school by bus. The classes start at 07:30 a.m., and last till 09:35 a.m., when we take a short break and the classes start again at 10:00 a.m. and last until midday. I go back home and have lunch, then I take a rest until 01:30 p.m., when I start doing the homework. By 3:30 p.m., I eat something and walk to the gym, where I stay until 05:30, I go back home and play some video games or do some reading. At 07:00 p.m. I go to the jiu-jitsu practice, it finishes at 08:30 p.m., then I go home, have dinner, take a shower, and around 09:30 p.m. I’m in bed sleeping.



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