Correção de textos: 12 Angry Men [No spoilers]

wflaviorj
Hi. Can someone revise my text?

"Another day I watched "12 angry men". It's a 50's movie all in black and white, but I must to say that it's great! It is always difficult to make a top list about anything, but this film is one of the best movie that I have ever saw.
I will not give any spoilers, but the film is about a juri that must to judge a boy as guilty or not guilty about his father's murder.
Well, I really indicate this movie. It is the fifth position at IMDb top rated movies."

Thanks.
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wflaviorj escreveu:Hi. Can someone revise my text?

"(Another day) *A FEW DAYS AGO / THE OTHER DAY I watched "12 angry men". It's a 50's movie all in black and white, but I must (to)1 say that it's great! It is always difficult to make a top list about anything, but this film is one of the best (movie)2 that I have ever (saw) SEEN.
I will not give any spoilers, but the film is about a (juri) JURY that must (to)3 judge a boy as guilty or not guilty (about) OF his father's murder.
Well, I really indicate this movie. It is IN the fifth position at IMDb top rated movies."

Thanks.
Tips:

Some words between () and numbered 1 to 3 you should not use at all. The modal MUST, for instance, is not followed by TO.

The words between () followed by capital letters, such as "MUST" are my tips to change in the text. Some words are mispelled.

Hope that helps.

Cheers!

wflaviorj
Thanks Cinnamon! You helped me a lot.