Correção para Luciana Alves: Self presentation

Hello,

My name is Luciana, I'm 20 and I live in São Paulo. I study Physical Therapy at University Nove de Julho (Uninove). Since I've stated to study at Uninove I met many increable people such as friends and teachers that help me in this jorney by inspiring and supporting me. Since I was a kid I wanted to help people feel better. Besides study matters about health I'm passionated at language learning, currently I've been studying English and Chinese. In my free time I enjoying to play piano, watch korean dramas and listening to K-pop music.

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Dear LUCIANA ALVES,

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Enjoy your reading. :)
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Hello.

My name is Luciana. I'm 20 and I live in São Paulo. I study Physical Therapy at University Nove de Julho (Uninove).

Since I've stated to study at Uninove I met many incredible people such as friends and teachers that help me in this jorney by inspired and supported me in this journey.

I wanted to help people feel better since I was a kid.

Besides studying matters about health, I'm passionated about languages learning. Currently I am 've been currently studying English and Chinese. In my free time, I enjoy playing piano, watching Korean dramas and listening to K-pop music.
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1st SUGGESTION:

Hello.

My name is Luciana. I'm 20 and I live in São Paulo. I study Physical Therapy at University Nove de Julho (Uninove).

I have met many incredible friends and teachers that inspired and supported me in this journey.

I wanted to help people feel better since I was a kid.

Besides studying health, I'm passionated about languages. I am currently studying English and Chinese. In my free time, I enjoy playing piano, watching Korean dramas and listening to K-pop music.
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2nd SUGGESTION:

Hello.

My name is Luciana. I'm 20 and I live in São Paulo. I study Physical Therapy at Nove de Julho University (Uninove) because I always wanted to help people feel better.

I met many incredible people that helped me since I started to study there.

I am also passionated about languages; currently, I am studying English and Chinese. I really like playing piano, watching Korean dramas and listening to K-pop music.
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