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- Luciana Alves
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Hello,
My name is Luciana, I'm 20 and I live in São Paulo. I study Physical Therapy at University Nove de Julho (Uninove). Since I've stated to study at Uninove I met many increable people such as friends and teachers that help me in this jorney by inspiring and supporting me. Since I was a kid I wanted to help people feel better. Besides study matters about health I'm passionated at language learning, currently I've been studying English and Chinese. In my free time I enjoying to play piano, watch korean dramas and listening to K-pop music.
My name is Luciana, I'm 20 and I live in São Paulo. I study Physical Therapy at University Nove de Julho (Uninove). Since I've stated to study at Uninove I met many increable people such as friends and teachers that help me in this jorney by inspiring and supporting me. Since I was a kid I wanted to help people feel better. Besides study matters about health I'm passionated at language learning, currently I've been studying English and Chinese. In my free time I enjoying to play piano, watch korean dramas and listening to K-pop music.
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Dear LUCIANA ALVES,
Find attached the corrections.
Enjoy your reading.
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Hello.
My name is Luciana. I'm 20 and I live in São Paulo. I study Physical Therapy at University Nove de Julho (Uninove).
Since I've stated to study at Uninove I met many incredible people such as friends and teachers that help me in this jorney by inspired and supported me in this journey.
I wanted to help people feel better since I was a kid.
Besides studying matters about health, I'm passionated about languages learning. Currently I am 've been currently studying English and Chinese. In my free time, I enjoy playing piano, watching Korean dramas and listening to K-pop music.
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1st SUGGESTION:
Hello.
My name is Luciana. I'm 20 and I live in São Paulo. I study Physical Therapy at University Nove de Julho (Uninove).
I have met many incredible friends and teachers that inspired and supported me in this journey.
I wanted to help people feel better since I was a kid.
Besides studying health, I'm passionated about languages. I am currently studying English and Chinese. In my free time, I enjoy playing piano, watching Korean dramas and listening to K-pop music.
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2nd SUGGESTION:
Hello.
My name is Luciana. I'm 20 and I live in São Paulo. I study Physical Therapy at Nove de Julho University (Uninove) because I always wanted to help people feel better.
I met many incredible people that helped me since I started to study there.
I am also passionated about languages; currently, I am studying English and Chinese. I really like playing piano, watching Korean dramas and listening to K-pop music.
_ _ _
Find attached the corrections.
Enjoy your reading.
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Hello.
My name is Luciana. I'm 20 and I live in São Paulo. I study Physical Therapy at University Nove de Julho (Uninove).
Since I've stated to study at Uninove I met many incredible people such as friends and teachers that help me in this jorney by inspired and supported me in this journey.
I wanted to help people feel better since I was a kid.
Besides studying matters about health, I'm passionated about languages learning. Currently I am 've been currently studying English and Chinese. In my free time, I enjoy playing piano, watching Korean dramas and listening to K-pop music.
_ _ _
1st SUGGESTION:
Hello.
My name is Luciana. I'm 20 and I live in São Paulo. I study Physical Therapy at University Nove de Julho (Uninove).
I have met many incredible friends and teachers that inspired and supported me in this journey.
I wanted to help people feel better since I was a kid.
Besides studying health, I'm passionated about languages. I am currently studying English and Chinese. In my free time, I enjoy playing piano, watching Korean dramas and listening to K-pop music.
_ _ _
2nd SUGGESTION:
Hello.
My name is Luciana. I'm 20 and I live in São Paulo. I study Physical Therapy at Nove de Julho University (Uninove) because I always wanted to help people feel better.
I met many incredible people that helped me since I started to study there.
I am also passionated about languages; currently, I am studying English and Chinese. I really like playing piano, watching Korean dramas and listening to K-pop music.
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