Correção de diálogo "Where do you live? ..."

Com base em um exercício proposto pelo site InglesJa.com, eu escrevi um texto somente com diálogos com base em algumas frases já determinadas no exercício passado. Um homem e uma mulher dialogando.

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- So... where do you live?

- I living in a house.

- Really?

- I'm kidding. You want eat something?

- I want a apple.

- There are. I can ask you something?

- Sure.

- What's the best thing in your life?

- The best thing in my life is love, ever.

- And... what are you like to eat?

- I like eat bread with cheese.

- Know... i'm think i love you. And i can't live without you.

- Me too.

- So... about you daugther... how old she is?

- She is nine years old. She is young, but very intelligent.

- Just a daugther?

- No... i have a son too. She is eleven years old. He loves football and food.

- I'm always right...

- About what?

- Nevermind... so... I think it's time for bed.

- But... it's 20:00pm... Oww! Now i get it.

- Glad you are beautiful.

- Why?

- Because you brain is very slow.
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Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 52185 21 84 1222
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Algumas sugestões de melhoria:


- So... where do you live?

- I live in a house.

- Really?

- I'm kidding. You want to eat something?

- I want an apple.

- Here you are. Can I ask you something?

- Sure.

- What's the best thing in your life?

- The best thing in my life is love, always.

- And... what do you like to eat?

- I like to eat bread and cheese.

- You know, I think I love you. And I can't live without you.

- Me too.

- So...what about you daugther... how old is she?

- She is nine years old. She is young, but very intelligent.

- Just one daughter?

- No... I have a son too. He is eleven years old. He loves football and food.

- I'm always right...

- About what?

- Never mind... so... I think it's time for bed.

- But... it's 20:00pm... Oww! Now I get it.

- Glad you are beautiful.

- Why?

- Because your brain is very slow.
Avatar do usuário dlr 75
20:00pm -> 8:00 pm or 8 pm
Oww! -> Oh!
"Oww" é o que se diz quando se machuca. "Oh" é para quando se dar conta de algo.

- Glad you are beautiful.
- Why?
- Because your brain is very slow.


hahaha