Correção de diálogo "Where do you live? ..."

Bruno FV 5
Com base em um exercício proposto pelo site InglesJa.com, eu escrevi um texto somente com diálogos com base em algumas frases já determinadas no exercício passado. Um homem e uma mulher dialogando.

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- So... where do you live?

- I living in a house.

- Really?

- I'm kidding. You want eat something?

- I want a apple.

- There are. I can ask you something?

- Sure.

- What's the best thing in your life?

- The best thing in my life is love, ever.

- And... what are you like to eat?

- I like eat bread with cheese.

- Know... i'm think i love you. And i can't live without you.

- Me too.

- So... about you daugther... how old she is?

- She is nine years old. She is young, but very intelligent.

- Just a daugther?

- No... i have a son too. She is eleven years old. He loves football and food.

- I'm always right...

- About what?

- Nevermind... so... I think it's time for bed.

- But... it's 20:00pm... Oww! Now i get it.

- Glad you are beautiful.

- Why?

- Because you brain is very slow.
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- So... where do you live?

- I live in a house.

- Really?

- I'm kidding. You want to eat something?

- I want an apple.

- Here you are. Can I ask you something?

- Sure.

- What's the best thing in your life?

- The best thing in my life is love, always.

- And... what do you like to eat?

- I like to eat bread and cheese.

- You know, I think I love you. And I can't live without you.

- Me too.

- So...what about you daugther... how old is she?

- She is nine years old. She is young, but very intelligent.

- Just one daughter?

- No... I have a son too. He is eleven years old. He loves football and food.

- I'm always right...

- About what?

- Never mind... so... I think it's time for bed.

- But... it's 20:00pm... Oww! Now I get it.

- Glad you are beautiful.

- Why?

- Because your brain is very slow.

dlr 75
20:00pm -> 8:00 pm or 8 pm
Oww! -> Oh!
"Oww" é o que se diz quando se machuca. "Oh" é para quando se dar conta de algo.
- Glad you are beautiful.
- Why?
- Because your brain is very slow.
hahaha