Pessoal , estou estudando para o TOEFL e estou encontrando muita dificuldade para redigir textos, pricipalmente quando se trata de conjugações verbais. Gostaria que alguém que pudesse desse um parecer sobre os erros comuns que cometo pois usar o google translate para corrigir erros de gramática não dá
O tema era : Se pudesse escolher, seria dono de sua própria empresa ou preferiria trabalhar para uma?
It’s hard to take a position, both cases have vantages and disadvantages. Although being a leader of a big company might be a dream for many people, on my view take a job in a company and work for it is a better choice.
Building a company may be tough. Building a company from nothing is hard, indeed many peoples fail. It is a complex proves involves lot of red tape, many taxes to pay, contracting people. The staff is hard to choice, the employer cannot choice lazy workers, they must to be trustable worker, and until the employer to find this kind of people he or she spend much time.
Being a leader of your own company is stressing. Always the man in charge have to take the hardest decisions, sometimes the decision change the direction of the company and make it fail. It is not difficult to find CEOs or peoples with high post, with stress problems; all their daily situations putted them in that condition. The owner of company always are in the highest post so he or she suffer these problems too.
It’s possible to make much money as the owner. When you is the best in doing your job, all companies will want you. Good workers bring many profits then they always have very good salaries. Many managers are millionaires and are as richer as their bosses are. When the worker are doing just one job, the same tasks, he can improving his ability with his job, and he becomes the kind of work commented previously, the one who everybody want.
So, before all those point I made above, we can draw a conclusion that worker as big companies owners, may be successful in their careers, but workers have a vantage, they have not to stand all company on their shoulders.
Aos que puderem ajudar, obrigado.