Correção de texto: changes

Andrezzatkm 2 8 107
You certainly have alredy heard someone saying, or you read somewhere, that we live in a changing time. The human being is in constant change since they are born.

Chenge can occur naturally and you cant avoid it.For exemple, the changes in your body throughout the time. Sometimes that changes are very visible, like when you switch from a child to a teenager.
There are changes also in the external environment and it affect your social relationship.

Your values, habits and behaviors can change according to the situation, place or time. Our opinion also change when you get differentes experiences and acquire news knowledges.

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Hi Andrezzatkm,

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You certainly have already heard someone saying, or you read somewhere, that we live in changing times. The human being is in constant change since they are born.

Change can occur naturally and you can't avoid it. For example, the changes in your body throughout the time. Sometimes those changes are very visible, like when you switch from being a child to become a teenager.
There are changes also in the external environment and it affects your social relationships.

Your values, habits and behaviors can change according to the situation, place or time. Our opinion also change when you get different experiences and acquire new knowledge.
Andrezzatkm 2 8 107
Preciso prestar mais atenção nos plurais e na conjugação da terceira da pessoa.
Uma dúvida, em "Our opinion also change when you get different experiences and acquire new knowledge" o correto não seria 'we' no lugar de 'you'?
Bem visto Joaoh! Uma possível melhoria:
Our opinion also changes when we get...
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