Correção de texto: I'm preparing for the TOEL iBT

Hello everyone!

I started study for the TOEFL in July, 2013 and I'm really afraid.
On TOEFL are 4 sections: Reading, Listening, Speaking and Writing. I believe that the first two sections are easier than others, so I want to improve my skills in speaking and writing.
Therefore, I'll send a lot of reading passages that i want to be corrected!

Thanks a lot!
Good day!
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I started studying for the TOEFL Examination in July, 2013, but I'm really afraid.
The test comprises of four sections: Reading, Listening, Speaking, and Writing.
I believe that the first two sections are easier than the others, so I want to improve my speaking and writing skills.
Therefore, I'll send a lot of reading passages that i would like to be corrected!
Muito obrigado Telma!!