Correção de texto: What I did last vacation

What I did last vacation
On my last vacation I went to Rio de Janeiro to make a visit to the my relatives. Everyone lived in the places that I passed they stayed happy with me. After I come back to São Paulo and I started to study the English lessons. All these facts it happened with me in the first ten of October.
On October 11th 2012 I did an English text at Wizard and I like my performance. That´s all.

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What I did on my last vacation

On my last vacation, I went to Rio de Janeiro to visit my relatives. Everyone lived in the places that I went to and they were very happy with me. After that, I came back to São Paulo and started to study the English lessons. All these things happened to me on the first ten days of October.
On October 11th 2012, I did an English test at Wizard and I liked my performance. That's all.

Bons estudos!