Que tal praticarmos um pouco de "writing"?

A proposta é o seguinte: Que tal contarmos uma história em inglês? Cada um contribuiria com um pequeno trecho, e o criador do primeiro trecho, quando achasse que seria o sufiente direcionaria a história para o fim. E os professores de plantão poderiam fazer as devidas correções, é claro. Só peço para separarem comentários e história, dessa forma, poderíamos padronizar comentários escritos em Português. O que acham?

Lá vai o primeiro trecho:

He was dirt. Dirt with the deepest red blood. And in his mind he couldn't figure out what happened. In his right hand, a knife showing this rage in blood and behind him a dead body of a young bealtiful lady, surrounded by blood, the deepest red blood. He thought he would never been there, but some of the objects were familiar. He wondered what a hell he was doing there...
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...in that dark house, covered by dust. Outside the window, a silent and hot jungle. Was he in another country?
Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49075 21 73 1138
Olá Aluisiomaia,

Ai vai:

All of a sudden he realized that he was dreaming and that reality was going to be over,then he headed for the forest trying to reflect on what he should´ve done and what he could´ve avoided...


I hope it´s good enough...
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... a Brazilian panther sauntering close by. That, he thought, he should avoid.
Avatar do usuário Anne Dietrich 60 1
It seems to be just a bad dream... a scary nightmare... But in fact it's his memories...He is a real killer... And he is haunted 24-7 by his memories... Memories of bloody crimes... And his memories will never leave him alone. This is his fate.

Anne.

:mrgreen: (just weird)
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Yet he now had to flee through unknown territory. "It all," he digressed, "comes with the territory. You kill a bit before the bit kills you--I knew, I knew I'd have to get around to the rain forest business... if only the fuzz quit chasing me, then I'd pull another bank job. A big one... but where could one possibly pull a big bank job, in São Paulo city?"
Avatar do usuário Anne Dietrich 60 1
;) He is still lost in his deranged world...

Anne...
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... or so he thought as he struggled through the dense jungle, his oversized trousers tripping him up as they fell around his ankles. Now he knew he'd have to get around the subject of giant swarms of five-inch-beaked mosquitos which incessantly raided him like vindictive airplane fighters on a dogfight. He struggled on, nevertheless, only to...
Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49075 21 73 1138
Hi there,

...realise that his life was hanging by a thread,he had no choice but to cut his own arm so that some of his blood could put those scary creatures off the scent.He managed to run away from that place while those carnivores stuffed themselves...


;)
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Avatar do usuário Anne Dietrich 60 1
:mrgreen: OMG! This story is so weird yet scary!
He's really insane anyways...

"He was so fascinated with his own blood... That red colour... He was completely obsessed with that scarlet fluid..."

Anne...