Correção de email para a Host Family

“Dear Mr.() and Mrs. ()
My name is() , I am () years old. I live in(),(), with my mother. I love listening to music, learn new things, I love pets mainly dogs and cats, I like going to the movies, parks and beaches.
This exchange program is something that I've always wanted and I’m very happy to know that I will have you as family and I really want to thank you for having me at your house. I would like very much to know more about neighborhood and you guys.
I am very excited for traveling to Netherby, would thank if send in your pictures, thanks for attention.

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Donay Mendonça 22 107 1.6k
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Dear Mr.() and Mrs. ()
My name is() , I am () years old. I live in(),(), with my mother. I love listening to music and learning new things. I love pets, especially dogs and cats. I like going to the movies, parks and beaches.
This exchange program is something that I've always wanted and I’m very happy to know that I will have you as a family and I really want to thank you for having me at your house. I would like very much to know more about the neighborhood and you.
I am very excited about traveling to Netherby and I would really appreciate it if you could send me your pictures. Thank you for your attention.
Henry Cunha 3 18 183
You don't mean all their pictures...

send me your pictures --> send me pictures (photos) of yourselves