Correção de texto: minha família

Please, correct this text for me.

In my home have three peoples. I, my wife and her brother.
My name is Renan and my birthday is July twenty-third.
My wife´s name is Maria, her birthday is October twenty-fourth.
My brother-in-law´s name is Fabiano, his birthday is August twenty-sixth.

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I have a small family/my family is a small family of three. I, my wife and her brother (or a brother-in-law instead of her brother -have the same effect, though.)

My name is Renan and my birthday is on July twenty-third (or written “on July, 23.”).
My wife´s name is Maria, and her birthday is on October twenty-fourth (ditto here).
My brother-in-law´s name is Fabiano, his birthday is on August twenty-sixth.




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