Correção de texto: "What I did last holiday"

What I did last holiday
The last holiday, I went with my brother at church, after we came back to house. When was 07:40 p. m. we received a phone call Renata´s that is our friends inviting us to go to pizza place.
At 09:10 p. m. we were already at home, I taked a shower and I went to bed.

I´d like to know if text is correct? Thanks for the help! Be with God!!!!!!!!!