Correção de texto: "Comic strip"

"Manolito: Yesterday I said to my dad we should can closes the store for a days and to go on vacation.
Mafalda: So?
Manolito: 'Vacation?' He asked.
'Of course. A little of air and sun are good to the health.' I said.
'And about the customers?' He asked.
'The customers buy in others stores.' I said.
'Did someone upsetting to this man?' The doctor asked. "

Eu peguei essa tirinha em português e tentei traduzir para o inglês.