Correção de Texto em inglês: The carnival

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The carnival

I used to hate carnival, because the TV channels has ever canceled the cartoons in order to show the carnival results. Nowadays, I have nothing against carnaval, but I'm against the excesses that people commit in carnival concerning alchoolic drinks, sex and drunks, transmitting sexual diseases, causing accidents and sometimes deaths.
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Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49075 21 73 1138
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I used to hate carnival, because TV channels always canceled cartoons in order to show carnival results. Nowadays, I have nothing against carnaval, but I'm against people's excesses during carnival concerning alchoolic drinks, sex and drunks, transmitting sexual diseases, causing accidents and sometimes deaths.
Oh, and also, I think that by "drunks" you actually meant drugs, right?!
Avatar do usuário draylson 15
Thanks donay mendonça! And thank you cameuptothisthing! You are right. It is "drugs". It was a type mistake. xD

Thanks