Começo com um "quick email" pra um potencial encontro de negócios:
Dear Mr. Finch,
I am interested on your proposal, and I want to know if we could have a meet to talk personally. I think that your ideas are precisely aligned with my thoughts. If you don’t mind, my partner will come with me. Tuesday morning is good for you?
Thank you for your attention.
Algo errado, ou que pode ser melhor escrito?