Resumo profissional em inglês

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Estou aqui novamente pedindo ajuda de vocês com um breve resumo profissional que pretendo colocar no meu currículo.
Agradeço enormente quem puder ajudar.

Comprising 2 years and 3 months in customer service in retail, receiving customers and finalizing sales with high attendance standards. During 1 year and 3 months, I was dedicated to the security and safety industry. For more than one year I was responsible for the drivers’ schedules who drove the directors of City bank and the integrity of their car based on current safety regulations.
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With 2 years and 3 months in customer service in retailing, receiving customers and finalizing sales with high-quality service standards. For 1 year and 3 months, I dedicated myself to the security and safety industry. For more than one year I was responsible for the drivers’ schedules who transported the directors of City bank and the integrity of their cars based on current safety regulations.


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