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Last year my family and I went to Recife and we stayed there about one month. Anywhere you go in the city you'll find lots of buildings, restaurants, supermakets. Sights such as Marco Zero , São José's Market, The seven bridges and Boa Viagem's beach are something fantastics ! Next to Marco Zero there was a restaurant where I ate something delicious called "Carne de Sol" (posso chamar Meat's Sun ? ). In There, I met someone fascinating called Maria. She was the restaurant's waitress who served us with huge simpathy and kindness. To tell you the truth, I can say anyone you meet in Recife will be helpful and friendly. The people there received us very well.

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Last year my family and I went to Recife and we stayed there FOR about one month. Anywhere you go in the city you'll find lots of buildings, restaurants, supermakets. VIEWS (OU PLACES ?) such as Marco Zero , São José's Market, The seven bridges and Boa Viagem's beach are fantastics ! Next to Marco Zero, there was a restaurant where I ate something delicious called "Carne de Sol" (posso chamar Meat's Sun ? Não. O apóstrofe indica posse... Como se você dissesse "o sol da carne", entao não pode. De qualquer forma, é melhor manter o nome em português entre aspas e não traduzir ao pé da letra). In There, I met someone fascinating called Maria. She was the restaurant's waitress who served us with A huge simpathy and kindness. To tell you the truth (seria melhor colocar HONESTLY ao invés de to tell you the truth), I can say anyone you meet in Recife will be helpful and friendly. The people there received us very well.
Thank you very much Ana!
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Last year my family and I went to Recife and we stayed there FOR about one month. Anywhere you go in the city you'll find lots of buildings, restaurants AND SUPERMARKETS. TOURISTIC SPOTS, such as: RECIFE´S GROUND ZERO, São José's Market, The seven bridges and Boa Viagem's beach, are FANTASTIC! Next to THE GROUND ZERO there was a restaurant, where I ate A delicious FOOD/MEAT, WHICH WAS called "Carne de Sol". AT THIS PLACE, I met someone fascinating WHOSE NAME WAS Maria. She was the restaurant's waitress, who served us with A huge kindness; AS A MATTER OF FACT, I WOULD SAY THAT anyone you meet in Recife will be helpful and friendly. WE WERE HOSTED VERY WELL BY the people OUT THERE.

* sympathy and kindness are synonyms .

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Thank you very much Redseahorse... Your suggestions were fantastic.