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You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles (64 kilometers) away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would choose. Give specific reasons for your choice.

Generally speaking, in nowadays it is common use different types of transportation to travel to another place. The person that will travel has to see what is better for him. For example, if you need to go for other state, but you have to go quickly, you should go by airplane. However, if I have to travel from my home to a place 64 kilometers away I have to choose another type of transportation.

First of all, there are many options to go to this place, like by metro. If I go by metro, I will travel faster and arrive more quickly. This is a good choose if I have no more time to lose and do not arrive late. In addition, take a metro is not so expensive. Thus, I will come faster and I do not will spend much money. On the other hand, another option to go it is by car. Nearly all the people that have a job have a car too. By the way, traveling by car is more comfortable that by metro. However, if I want to travel by car I have to spend more money than by metro.

Secondly, I can choose travel by bus. This option may not be the best, but sometimes you just do not get travel by metro and you do not have a car too. One solution for that is travel by bus, it is really ship, but it is not comfortable.

Thirdly, another way to travel it is by bicycle. I should choose this if I want to do some exercise, like a challenge for myself. For this option you just need to have breath, and go ahead to arrive to the place.

For conclusion, it was clearly seen that I have many options to go to the wanted place. Therefore, I will choose to travel by metro. Because it is not so expensive like by car, but it is for sure better than by bus and by bicycle.