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Claudius ruled Rome between 41 and 54 CE. Some people said him was a good ruler for Rome, however, some people desagree.

There is no doubt. He was a wise and fair person. He was the first king to pay the army and he created laws to protect the slaves. In addition, he build a lot of important contructions for Rome. An example were: Arqueducts and a new harbor for the city. He expanded Rome by conquering and incorporating the island of Britain.

However,Claudis for some persons, was not so good person like some texts said. He murdered a lot of people who was in your way. And he made some ilegal decisions for get what he wanted and need. In addition, the emperor Claudius love gleidietor fight, in other word, he loved to see people fighting each other for no reason, just for fun.

It is important to say that his son was the worst rulers of Rome, but he can not be guilty because of this.