Correção de texto: Personal presentation [1336]
- Stefani Nogueira
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Meu nome é Jennifer, tenho 35 anos, sou casada e não tenho filhos. Sou brasileira mas atualmente moro na Suiça e trabalho como babá.
I’m Jennifer and I am 35 years old. I’m married and don't have children. I’m Brazilian but I currently live in Switzerland. I’m babysitter.
I’m Jennifer and I am 35 years old. I’m married and don't have children. I’m Brazilian but I currently live in Switzerland. I’m babysitter.
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- PPAULO
- Localização: Rio de Janeiro-Brazil
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Can also be:
Married and childless
Married and I don't have any children
Married and I have no children
Child-free is also possible, but (to my thinking) it mostly suggests a context of choice. Meaning you and hubby have chosen so, that is, both don't intend to have for the time being.
Perhaps it's counts as a too personal information in a first introduction.
Married and childless
Married and I don't have any children
Married and I have no children
Child-free is also possible, but (to my thinking) it mostly suggests a context of choice. Meaning you and hubby have chosen so, that is, both don't intend to have for the time being.
Perhaps it's counts as a too personal information in a first introduction.
- PPAULO
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'Oops' time now...
Perhaps it's counts as a too personal information in a first introduction. (sic)
Perhaps it counts as a too personal information in a first introduction.
Perhaps that counts as a too personal information in a first introduction
Excuse my grammar mistakes! "it's counts" is a no no. I don't know what I drank that day!
Perhaps it's counts as a too personal information in a first introduction. (sic)
Perhaps it counts as a too personal information in a first introduction.
Perhaps that counts as a too personal information in a first introduction
Excuse my grammar mistakes! "it's counts" is a no no. I don't know what I drank that day!
- Simon Vasconcelos
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Stefani, a sua apresentação é perfeitamente compreensível. Eu somente faria uma pequena alteração no fim. Diante de profissões, devemos usar um artigo indefinido (I'm a babysitter).
Para o seu texto ficar menos truncado e sem repetições, eu escreveria desta forma:
My name is Jennifer, a thirty-five-year-old, married and child-free Brazilian woman. Nowadays, I live in Switzerland and work as a nanny.
OBS.: "Thirty-five-year-old" também pode ser escrito "35-year-old".
Para o seu texto ficar menos truncado e sem repetições, eu escreveria desta forma:
My name is Jennifer, a thirty-five-year-old, married and child-free Brazilian woman. Nowadays, I live in Switzerland and work as a nanny.
OBS.: "Thirty-five-year-old" também pode ser escrito "35-year-old".
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