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Hi, Bill!

Thank you, again!
I learned a lot! =)

Kisses,
Dany
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I have a German Shepherd. Her name is Hanna and she is a little crazy, because she destroys everything. I can't have any plants at all. But I love her very much and she is the most intelligent animal I know.
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Anielli escreveu:I have a German Shepherd. Her name is Hanna and she is a little crazy, because she destroys everything. I can't have any plants at all. But I love her very much and she is the most intelligent animal I know.


Anielli,

Each of your sentences are correct, however I think that most Americans would say or write something like this,
"I have a crazy German Shephard named Hanna who likes to chew on and destroy everything, even my plants. In spite of her faults I love her very much and she is the most intelligent animal I know."

I realize that this makes proper construction more difficult for a student, but Americans tend to use complex sentences instead of simple ones. Remember that when you combine different thoughts into one sentence you will normaly need a conjunction.
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Anielli escreveu:I have a German Shepherd. Her name is Hanna and she is a little crazy, because she destroys everything. I can't have any plants at all. But I love her very much and she is the most intelligent animal I know.


Anielli,

Each of your sentences are correct, however I think that most Americans would say or write something like this,
"I have a crazy German Shephard named Hanna who likes to chew on and destroy everything, even my plants. In spite of her faults I love her very much and she is the most intelligent animal I know."

I realize that this makes proper construction more difficult for a student, but Americans tend to use complex sentences instead of simple ones. Remember that when you combine different thoughts into one sentence you will normaly need a conjunction.
I have two dogs called Boni and Teo.
They are lovely and make me very happy everytime. One Shitzu and one Maltes.
Hi, everybody! :)

I had a dog called "Bill", a beautiful German Shepherd and a Hamster "Key".

Regards.
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Fernandokant escreveu:I have two dogs called Boni and Teo.
They are lovely and make me very happy everytime. One Shitzu and one Maltes.


Fernandokant,

Please read my post about complex sentences in this thread and then consider this rewrite.

"I have two lovely dogs, a Shitzu and a Maltese whose names are Boni and Teo, and they make me very happy all the time."

I hope you can understand this and that it helps you.
Yes yes,i do have a dog.It's very noisy,i preffer cats.At the end i guess there's no difference,I love all the animals cause with them you can be sure if you're or are not loved;)
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BrunoCosta escreveu:Yes yes,i do have a dog.It's very noisy,i preffer cats.At the end i guess there's no difference,I love all the animals cause with them you can be sure if you're or are not loved;)


Bruno,

With your consent, I will offer some suggestions, first if you will please read my posts in this thread about simple and complex sentences, then consider my rewrite of your post.

"Yes! I have a very noisy dog, but I actually prefer cats. However, after considering all facets of the discussion there's no real difference, I love all animals because with them you always know if you are or are not loved."

I hope that you can profit from this post.
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BrunoCosta escreveu:Yes yes,i do have a dog.It's very noisy,i preffer cats.At the end i guess there's no difference,I love all the animals cause with them you can be sure if you're or are not loved;)


Bruno,

With your consent, I will offer some suggestions, first if you will please read my posts in this thread about simple and complex sentences, then consider my rewrite of your post.

"Yes! I have a very noisy dog, but I actually prefer cats. However, after considering all facets of the discussion there's no real difference, I love all animals because with them you always know if you are or are not loved."

I hope that you can profit from this post.






Thank you.I have no doubt it will help me see more carefully everything i write.And i'm sure !'ll take a look at what you wrote and certainly will learn a lot more!