Hello everyone, here is my first text in English
to my course.
Hello everyone, here is my first writing assignment from my (English) course.
I will do a trip to England on the
next week, this trip will last more or
less 2 weeks. I want to see all the architecture (of the buildings), see the
Big Ben  Tower (or...the Big Ben Tower Clock), know some pubs
too. I will go by (air)plane but not with a package that have hotel, guide and stuff like those. Because I want to know how is to live in
this country, to walk the streets like everyone else, to all places. " [also, to each and every place.]
Don´t wish such a thing, anything involving the the Big Bang. It´s too loud !
Notice, don´t quote unquote a text, generally you do that with a sentence, or a line from a character. A paragraph perhaps, if you are citing someone else, but an entire piece of text!
First of all, congrats on your trying, nobody is born knowing everything, that is a universal truth.
In fact, we learn more from what we don´t know, than from what we know (since somewhat we tend to superestimate what we know, and underestimate what we don´t know). So, when we don´t know much, we are in the beggining, the learning curve is steep, we learn a lot.
Now, your text reveals an inventive, restless and promising mind. It hints that you know a coupla things about the United Kingdom and its culture.
And even with your workload, family issues and studies, and sometimes (it seems) you getting swamped with tasks, you go ahead and take an English course. Congrats, go ahead.
Your writing skills are promising, with some corrections here and there; but seems like you are off to a good start!