Correção para felipe_ferraz14: My first text

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So, I don't know what about I'll write here. This lesson is about I to use some words which I learned while I was listening and reading in text before. Well, I read about much subjects so I will tell you about my day. I woke up at 06:00am, I was to shower and I had my breakfast. Later I was to my work at 07:30am I go walking to my work. I had a hard day at work, I had several meeting with my boss but it was ok. Next I had lunch at 12:00 pm and I don't know speak what I ate in my lunch. Well, Now I'm writing my lesson and I hope have a good day.

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So, I don't know what I'm going to write here.

This lesson is about *using some words that I learned after listening and reading the text. Well, I read about many subjects, so I will tell you about my day.

I woke up at 06:00am, took a shower and I had my breakfast. I walked to work and got here at 7:30. **I'm having a hard day at work. ***I've had several meetings with my boss, but they were all ok. I had lunch at 12:00 pm and I don't remember what I ate.

Well, now I'm writing my lesson and I hope to have a good day.

*Gerund after prepositions.
**I understand you're still at work.
***Use the present perfect tense for actions that happened a short while ago.
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